Special Stars

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    I give this poem to all the children I am fortunate to have contact with. Schools in my area, churches recreational centers ect... I write special poerty for children to explain my take on their world. I also sent this one to Oprah. (smile when you are sad) I have hundreds just for kids:)

    Special Stars

    A child said grandma's gone, and I worry everyday
    Where's she's at, if she's ok.
    Her mother sat her down to say,
    She's in a better place today.
    You see the twinkling stars at night,
    And when the moon is shining bright.
    Between it all, in a big chair,
    Is grandma rocking, look over there.
    And sure enough we found that chair,
    Among the stars just nestled there.
    I think it's grandma's special sign,
    The more I looked, the more it shined.
    And now at night when I look at the sky,
    It makes me happy, I don't cry.
    Because I know she's watching me,
    Rocking and smiling happily.

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    jademelissa74 commented on Special Stars

    07-22-2009

    This is extremely inspirational, a great dedication to God's little angels! You will touch many hearts with this one. Great job. Keep on writing and I will keep on reading :))

    acusty commented on Special Stars

    07-06-2009

    this poem makes me miss my mom cus she is a star in heaven now and i know she is smiling down at me.touching one.

    Paisa commented on Special Stars

    07-04-2009

    i like diz poem..reminds me wen i lost my grandma n i had no idea were she went..i couldnt believe she ws gone..but i new that she was da brightest star in the sky..

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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