Fragile Heart / In Search


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This is one of a series of Fragile Heart poems written over a period of time.

Fragile Heart / In Search

Who can save a Fragile Heart?

One who's souls been torn apart.
One that doesn't have a dream
One voice becomes a silent scream
One overcome by life's grip
On love and relationship

Who can save a Fragile Heart?

One more Cupid arrow to dart
One problem I just can't solve
One point in time that won't evolve
One sense that all is in vain
One broken heart, Oh such pain

Who can save a Fragile Heart?

One precious moment won't you start?
One searches for this everyday
One to give, who will stay
One memory that will last
One thing to hold on from the past

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Sx9 commented on Fragile Heart / In Search


that is all u ask,,nice strong,,reto,original,great work,,just is..respect..

Chrisjan commented on Fragile Heart / In Search


You have a gift for writting. You words that arise from you soul, travel through your heart, then full expression on paper. This is another excellent poem. Thanks for sharing.

roseblooming commented on Fragile Heart / In Search


I like the repetition of "One" on each line that makes this a melody. Nice.



I am the One, that searches. Though I leave it open knowing it could be anyone. Thanks

MzOmowale commented on Fragile Heart / In Search


Very beautiful and meaningful. Hearts are fragile.



Hello Dear friend, you know I am overflowing. It is my nature. I have connected with many hearts, kind, hard, and a few fragile as mine. Thank you

Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

Aza’s Poems (15)

Title Comments
Title Comments
Why 7
My Fragileheart 9
They say 4
The Battle of Sin 5
Just in case you want to know 3
Where can you be? 1
Love Letter 7
What am I willing to give? 5
Dedication 3
Out and in Love 0
Special Stars 3
Over 2
Crush 5
Fantasy 9
Fragile Heart / In Search 4