Take My Hand

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    Take My Hand

    Take my hand, lead me to green pastures.
    Let me drink purified water from the fountain of love.
    Let me dance in your arms, whisper in your ear.
    Let me feel safe and secure, but never let go of my hand.
    Take my hand, for with it comes great trust.
    I never leave you alone but walk beside you on shore.
    Unless if by chance you decide to carry me, but never let go of my hand.
    Take my hand, it will bring great comfort.
    For gentleness is the secret to a warm touch.
    If I extend my hand then obvious your worthy and I will follow you for the rest of my dying days.
     Take my hand.

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    Chaos128 commented on Take My Hand

    05-14-2010

    A cool, customized version of the 23rd psalm ha ha and there ain't no harm in that - A very hip idea :)
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    lisagrizzly commented on Take My Hand

    12-09-2009

    Oh my gosh it just brings tears to my eyes. Now many souls cry out for him to take their hands. I can feel divinity. Footprints in the sand comes to mind whether he carries you or not you are safe in his hands. Ty:)
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    Teardrops commented on Take My Hand

    12-05-2009

    is a very true and gentle way of discribing love thanks for letting me read your poem
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    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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