Spend The Night In Your Mind

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    Spend The Night In Your Mind
    I'm trying to be the one with you
    Hear you out, walk in your shoes
    Elevate your mind, lay down in your heart
    Inspire and learn and accumulate spaarks
    I rather make love to your thoughts
    Get lifted off everthing thats being taught
    Have an orgasm off being in your head
    create peace like silence of the dead
    Dream your vision, relax knowing how you feel
    Fall in love with what's real
    I prefer to be just fine
    While I spend the night in your mind

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    nikki78 commented on Spend The Night In Your Mind

    09-01-2009

    that was really good, I loved the way it flows. it was really good wow
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    Khoko commented on Spend The Night In Your Mind

    05-19-2009

    Wonderful! About the best I've read all night (and I'm an insomiac, so I do mean all night)
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    Raya commented on Spend The Night In Your Mind

    05-16-2009

    LOVE IT, LOVE IT, LOVE IT!!! I'm speechless...good job!!
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    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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