Lord Save This World

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    Lord Save This World
    Lord save this world.
    What are diamonds and pearls;
    to a lost little girl?
    See many are blind and refuse to see;
    instead of asking: LORD can you help me?
    What's the meaning of be all you can be,
    when all that surround me are murders and thiefs.
    And since only you can judge he or she;
    make strong the weak.
    Teach children to lead;
    the blessed to be sweet.
    So many are in need
    but the world is full of greed.
    Millionaires increase, while the poor weep.
    Drugs overflowing the streets;
    right now it's hard to keep peace.
    And the young die young;
    the smart is turning for dumb.
    How much shall we overcome,
    to say we just won one?
    LORD save this world.

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    lisagrizzly commented on Lord Save This World

    12-09-2009

    oh I love this deep heartfelt poem., Oh isn't that all believers heart cry, Thank you God Bless
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    danmartyjake1 commented on Lord Save This World

    12-09-2009

    No doubt many feel this way and your perfectly chosen words sum it up incredibly well.
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    jesusfreake commented on Lord Save This World

    12-09-2009

    no worries...He wins in the end...every knee shall bow to Him, and its not up to HIm to save the world thats what we are here for. We must be strong in the Lord and to do His Will he has for us which is to teach about Him and to make His name famous..we have the power and the responsibility to bringing the honor to His name in this world...but u are aware of the nightmares in this world and i love this poem because u speak out about it...keep praying, 'Lord save this world' He'll give us that strength we need
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    Chaos128 commented on Lord Save This World

    11-16-2009

    A heartfelt prayer for a better world. Be a little more careful with your usage:"all that surround me are murders and thiefs." Overall ,"Lord Save This World" is a valid and sincere piece.
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    Chigger2069 commented on Lord Save This World

    05-05-2009

    very nice like the way its composed keep up the good work
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    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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