The Note… RAP/POEM

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    The Note… RAP/POEM

    I woke up this morning, with a note beside my head, picked it up to read it, can’t believe what my eyes read. “Sorry for misleading you, with all of what I said, But that was just a cover up to get you in your bed. I hope you had a good time, even though I fled”. He signed it at the bottom, he signed it simply Ted.

    “Oh no” I know he didn’t, now I’m seeing red,
    If he did not want me, then why we newly wed.
    I found him at a friends house and hit him with a sled, how cool it was to watch the pool of blood he slowly bled. I think that I have killed him, I’m pretty sure he’s dead. I heard the sirens coming, I got nabbed by the feds.

    I stand here in this jail cell, my thoughts are filled with dread, it wasn’t long before the court room I was led. The Judge asked just one question, guilty I have plead but since the jurs were women, and they saw the note I read, they told the Judge I’m innocent and got me off instead.

    By Heather D. Roe

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    bforibus commented on The Note… RAP/POEM

    12-26-2008

    close to a lil disturbing but i loved it.

    Conchess commented on The Note… RAP/POEM

    12-22-2008

    Very creative I think, and real.

    loyalpoet commented on The Note… RAP/POEM

    12-09-2008

    love it has to go in my favorites

    kenparme commented on The Note… RAP/POEM

    11-28-2008

    Good poem-made me laugh.

    steezville commented on The Note… RAP/POEM

    11-24-2008

    wow that was so coool!!!!....do you publish your poems??..cos it says u have 70 something poems!!!...u go!!!

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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