The Promise

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    The Promise
    The wind is blowing through the trees
    And a song is riding on the breeze.
    A song of life, a song of peace.
    A song of joy, a song of ease.

    A song where Spirit says to me,
    Be joyful, happy and be free.
    I will take care of all your needs.
    You need not fret, I'll sow the seeds.

    The seeds will blossom and soon will grow,
    Like beautiful flowers and a love aglow.
    A love for the ages, a love that is pure,
    A love that is guaranteed to endure.

    Just trust in me, I will not fail
    I'll send you love that will prevail.
    Just live in peace and you will see
    All will be well, I promise thee.

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    cliftondurant commented on The Promise

    07-08-2009

    great poem he will always keep his promise and thats a wonderful feeling love your work
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    wheelsal commented on The Promise

    06-28-2009

    This could be a prayer you wrote to soothe your bleeding heart. It works well as a song also. Good job.
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    blanket commented on The Promise

    06-10-2009

    Imagery is wonderful. I float on with you. Uplifting and calming and rhyme is methodical. 10+ on this one as well.
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    extrarib commented on The Promise

    05-31-2009

    Very nice heart felt poem. You shine through your poetry very nicely. I really enjoy reading your work.
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    lightcourier commented on The Promise

    05-01-2009

    nice and pleasant to read. thanks.
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    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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