The Rendezvous

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    The Rendezvous

     When I walked out
    into the afternoon,
    I noticed a different sun
    so extraordinary
    that its brilliance
    did not blind my eyes.
    Its rays gave everything
    a fantastic brightness,
    transparent and cool.
    Marvelling at this vision,
    I caught my reflection
    in the car window
    and saw another person
    where I used to be.
    The experience of you
    reshaped my identity.
    I could feel your smile
    turning me a richer,
    deeper shade of gold.
    Could you feel my fingers
    stroking my satisfaction
    into your wonderful skin?
    I want your special sun
    to shine on me again
    with all your fire.

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    StandingBear commented on The Rendezvous

    08-20-2009

    An excellent, creative work relating the light romance/eroticism so often denied people due to the rush of life. When experienced everything is opened to the eyes, the senses in a pleasant, different fashion. Great write.
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    NenaT

    08/23/2009

    From your comments, I can tell you completely got this poem. Thank you

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    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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