The Star Beside the Moon

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    The Star Beside the Moon

     

    Lonely but not alone
    Skin of flesh and a heart of stone 
     As memories began to fade away
    I fall onto my knees begging them to stay
    I hear nothing but an echo from the past
    Forever repeating itself, something’s were meant to last
    And I know that distance will dies soon 
    When we finally realize we still sleep under the same moon
    Lost and then found, walked and then ran
    I forced you to fall into pieces so that no one can repair you...damn
    I knew my power, but how would I have known it was leaving
    There's no such thing as a heart that breaks even
    I need you to guard me and make me brighter
    I'm not beautiful but you illuminate me like a match to a lighter
    It’s like
    Destruction wanting doom
    Like a star beside the moon

     

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    blackfootlady commented on The Star Beside the Moon

    12-02-2010

    Excellent write I truely love the ending so very much,,,God Bless-Black

    Miriam

    12/04/2010

    Thanks a lot!

    RHPeat commented on The Star Beside the Moon

    11-27-2010

    Nice use of comparisons. Think more on the musical. Keep up the good writing. A poet friend// RH Peat

    Miriam

    11/30/2010

    Thank you, thats sounds like a good idea!

    nhorlandi commented on The Star Beside the Moon

    06-24-2010

    I like the last line "I'm not beautiful but you illuminate me a match to a lighter." For me the moon only becomes beautiful when there is a bright star beside it. Thumbs up...

    paula commented on The Star Beside the Moon

    06-20-2010

    I think your poem was a little deep for someone so young. But I did enjoy it. Very deep.

    ansari commented on The Star Beside the Moon

    06-17-2010

    Its a vivid expression in retrospection . I like it. thank you. a 10 from me

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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    An Unforgotten Glance 41
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