The Way I Feel

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    I know this doesn't sound much like a poem. But it's how I feel right now. When that person is walking away you will do anything to stop it. I love you B.A.C forever and for always.

    The Way I Feel
    Nobody is perfect.
    Everyone has their flaws.
    I have mine
    You have yours.
    It's the inperfections
    that make me love you so much.
    That twinkle in your eye
    When you say you love me.
    The way it sounds
    When you promise you'll stay.
    I don't want to lose this.
    Promise you walk away.
    Because baby if you don't
    I can promise we can work this out.
    Let me be your butterfly.
    Let me hold your hand.
    I'll walk with you to ends of the earth.
    If we can hold on to what we have
    We can make it through anything.
    You're my world
    My heart.
    Without you I am nothing.
    Don't let me feel empty.
    I can't help the way I way feel.
    Can't shake this feeling of loving you.
    I love you.

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    TheLastCowboy commented on The Way I Feel

    08-01-2012

    Genuine Love! i can feel the pull, the desire, what a writing!
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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