There's a Reason They Call Me Heartless...

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    There's a Reason They Call Me Heartless...

    She pounded on my chest...

    and the THUD sound echoed within me

    she had no idea

    that my chest cavity was empty

    she was crying and trying to revive me

    nothing she tried would work

    she screamed frantically, "what's wrong?

    ANSWER ME, YOU STUPID JERK!!!"

    I just looked at her with a blank expression

    as if she should know the answer to this question

    I took my pocket knife and stabbed it into my chest

    no blood came out

    there was none left

    I ripped open my chest so she could see

    there was no heart to be found in me

    "I should have told you before we started this...



    There is a reason girls call me heartless"

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    ForeverGrace commented on There's a Reason They Call Me Heartless...

    02-19-2009

    Believe it or not, even as a female, I enjoyed reading this. I liked it, it has good flow.

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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