Time Wins

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    Time Wins

    Time races by when a good time is being had.
    Time crawls when there is something to look forward to.
    Time races dread and win.
    Time races fun and wins.
    Time races life and wins.
    People say they have all the time in the world, 
    but time races by, races by.
    What are we waiting for?
    (Let’s jump right in)
    time is being wasted here.
    (Lets jump right in)
    life is for the living now.
    (Lets jump right in)
    the car is running in the drive
    (lets jump right in)
    and go live our lives in the time we have.

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    keithrberryjr commented on Time Wins

    08-08-2009

    So true.I really enjoyed this poem.Someone once told me that we only have 24 hrs to live.We have to go out and live as if that was the case because tomorrow may never come.Great Poem
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    firepixie

    08/09/2009

    Exactly what i was thinking as i wrote this!

    keller commented on Time Wins

    08-01-2009

    true for sure,so many people just watching life pass.
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    firepixie

    08/02/2009

    it so sad seeing people watch from the sidelines. thank you, it means a lot to me to have feedback on my work.

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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