Time

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    Time

     Time keeps moving and I feel like
    I'm standing still unable to move
    because of fear, uncertainty,
    self-doubt and insecurities. 
    I question myself constantly,
    I am my own worst critic
    and in the end I will only have
    myself to blame for the destruction of my life. 
    I need to free myself from these shackles
    that keep me a prisoner of my own mind
    but I haven't been able to find the key
    to unlock the restraints.

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    danmartyjake1 commented on Time

    04-17-2010

    Keep writing, the key to unlocking your true self and potential is within the journey and writing will bring it to pass more quickly.
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    countrypoet commented on Time

    12-23-2009

    At times we all feel like this. I have found that the best way to move beyond it is to pray about it,listen to your own intuition and then move forward on what your intuition tells you to do.God has blessed each of us with the gift of intuition and if we listen to that "inner voice" it helps guide us to better decisions in our life.You have a wonderful talent for poetry and have written a very powerful and insightful poem abouit life.Keep on writing and don't lose faith.You will reach your goals and dreams at the right moment in time.
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    Staycee commented on Time

    11-30-2009

    I enjoyed reading this I completely understand how we become trap inside of ourselves how we are responsible for our own doom yet we somehow get lost and long to find the key that sets us free ................well done
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    Teardrops commented on Time

    11-30-2009

    A poem from you heart, We all fear at one time or another and you say it so beautifully in this poem
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    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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