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trapped

Running in my mind from problems I can’t see

Feet stand still in reality

Eyes seem to be looking at nothing at all

Feelings hang on a frayed rope with promises of fall

Not sure what to think or if I can

Looking in my heart for any kind of plan

Darkness shrouds me no hope can I see

I feel closed in, is this my reality

I think i feel something brush past me but this cant be i'm all alone

Then i fell a warm touch and words being spoke in gentle tone

Faint at first the doubt still here the words become comforting all of a sudden so clear

I fell the gentle pull on my hand and encourage by this voice

It reassures me i’m not alone it says i have a choice

I’m in the light now but the rope is gone i hear more words in that caring tone

I feel weightless and realize he carried me i was never alone

All at once i see it so clear that with the help of those who care there is

Nothing to fear my heart fills with happiness a feeling i thought lost

And this friend came for me asking for nothing no cost

He stands next to me and says these words
promise made promise not broken

He led me out of the dark with the gentle words he had spoken

You will never be alone i’m never too far to care friends forever this i swear

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anomalie commented on trapped 07-05-2009: Man, This poem hits home for me. It reminds me of one of my darkest times in life. I remember feeling alone and wayward, without hope. You see at this time in life I had walked away from the principles I held dear to me from childhood. This had greatly affected my outlook on life and My future. So without options I did the one thing left...probably the first thing I should have done, I prayed. Then as funny as it sounds 5 minutes later after crying my eyes out in prayer I picked up a watchtower magazine and ran into my favorite scripture Isaiah 41: 10, 13. Read it sometime bro if you ever feel that way again It I felt just as you did after I read it especially the last line" you will never be alone i"m never too far to care friends forever this I swear".; Reply to Comment

dvusdreams 07/05/2009: thank you very much for the scripture very uplifting when i wrote this i honestly was not thinking of God but you my friend have actually made me see who was helping me great way to see the poems true meaning thank you

nu2ya2000 commented on trapped 07-04-2009: I cant even describe the feelings when reading this poem. Its just that amazing. you have a true gift when it comes to words. I also like the rhyme scheme you have. overall great poem; Reply to Comment

dvusdreams 07/04/2009: i thank you very much not many understand my poetry but everything i write comes from personal moments in my life its good to know i am not the only one who understands me thank you again