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     As rivers of clouds blanket mountain tops
    Allows a peekaboo glimpse of where the heavens stop
    Colors and smells overwhelm every sense and cell stem
    Fields of flowers and green grass that seem to never end
    Caught in a rainbow of euphoria as majestic as the northern lights
    The sun peeking beyond the horizon and the moon shining so bright

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    wheelsal commented on untitled

    03-15-2010

    Happened to find you on here. I feel this beauty and love it with you. Wish you had a title for it. Nice job.
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    FLAWLES commented on untitled

    06-24-2009

    This is pretty cool. It sounds like you're laying on your back, looking at what you see. Your description couldn't be more exact.
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    boriquamorena

    06/26/2009

    You know actually I was.But thinking instead of looking.

    jademelissa74 commented on untitled

    06-20-2009

    Ahhhh, a very refreshing scene! The serenity of your passage is felt within the completion of its reading! A great poem! Continue to write poetry, you seem to have what it takes to capture the reader's attention :)) God bless you!
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    boriquamorena

    06/22/2009

    Im learning to use the computer and also to allow others to read my poems.I appreciate the critics and encouragement.GOD BLESS you and your talent.You elloquently use your words. thanx

    origionalmerlin commented on untitled

    06-16-2009

    being in fairbanks alaska, and having caught the lights in full glory last november good image
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    boriquamorena

    06/22/2009

    thank you soooo much god bless you.

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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