WONDER

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WONDER

WONDER


When I see the blue sky
I wonder if I could fly

Open my wings and feels the air
Rushing furiously through my hair

Wondering if I could be a Sparrow
Carefree, flying leaving behind the earth , streets
Which are so narrow

But deep beneath, somewhere I know
That there is a thick chain
Holding me back and not letting me go

But I can still dream to fly
It just hold me not my thoughts
Which are so colorful and too strong to die

Mortality is for flesh and bones
But it is the soul and the thoughts
Which are always there and never die

I wonder if I could fly…….


___SYED

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Phoenix9 commented on WONDER

02-05-2009

well done, wish i could flyy too

Corinna commented on WONDER

01-30-2009

Love it, and yes! You can fly!

drewking commented on WONDER

01-28-2009

good piece of work,, good rhythm...

sjlove commented on WONDER

01-28-2009

i wish i could fly.. i wondered if there is an afterlife that i would be an eagle.. =]

Melj710 commented on WONDER

01-27-2009

I can feel it. It's deep. Nice flow like a river.

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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DARK 6
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