20 Words Challenge,,,,,,
Fall leaves in the breezesetting souls free
Free to breath, free
to believe whatever
one soul want to be
20 Words Challenge,,,,,,
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Poem Commentary
Hi guys this is just for fun to see how deep we can get with a mere 20 words or less.
With each post we will follow each other taking it to the next level. So I hope u come out to play with and show us how profound few words can be. Join us in the poetry lounge and post what you feel.
setting souls free
Free to breath, free
to believe whatever
one soul want to be
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zorbica commented on 20 Words Challenge,,,,,,
11-12-2009
- beautiful poem infiniti...........lovely - zorbica
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11/12/2009
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Beetle726 commented on 20 Words Challenge,,,,,,
11-12-2009
- 20 word challenge is tough. Sometimes it is harder to be short and to the point than it is to tell it all. Very well done. I was in the scene with you. You expressed the thoughts and desires of us all.
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11/12/2009
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