A Ray Of Light

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This poem is for all those broken in spirit. Just when you think you can't go on, hold on because the sun will always raise and it is our hope that you will raise with it.

A Ray Of Light

Peaking though darken clouds a ray of light giving life to all those in sight.

Beaming down hope from  above to those broken in spirit never leaving
out the undeserving ones.

Darken clouds each one different from the next. Drifting across the sky always ready and willing to give way to the ever merging ray of light.
 
Even when you feel you have lost the fight, keep it in sight because it will always raise even if you don't.

So never give up doing what is right and make way for that ever ray of light that will continue to bring hope to all those in sight.

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TREVON commented on A Ray Of Light

12-10-2011

I like it it reminds us all that even on the darkest day there is always hope, if you keep the faith.

simoneaugustus commented on A Ray Of Light

10-14-2009

This was so powerfully hopeful! I especially love the line 'never leaving out the undeserving ones.' Truly beautiful!

infiniti

10/14/2009

Thanks so much simon I am glad to liied it and hope u continue to read more. Your friend in poetry, Infiniti

BlaQReign commented on A Ray Of Light

10-13-2009

Being a ray of light in someone's life will always be a blessing to them....Very well said, again...BlaQ' Soul

infiniti

10/14/2009

Thanks, I am pleased that u liked it. Infiniti

Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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