Love Out Of Sight

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  • Lost Love

    Poem Commentary

    As she came in my office with tears covering her face saying I'm a fool. All I could say to her is,
    we have all been there at lease once in our
    life time.
    Without pain there is no growth and your only a fool if you refuses to learn and return. 
    Don't allow yourself to become bitter just see it for what it is a good lesson learned and forgive but never forget so you won't end up like all the rest.

    Love Out Of Sight

    He's up late into the night making 
    love out of sight.
    He's telling lies and destroying
    lives because love out of sight
    always feel so right.
    Changing his name so that 
    the one now in pain won't
    expose his game. 

    In fear he becomes faithful in prayer 
    Brother so right except to his wife 
    when he up late into the night making 
    that love out of sight. 

    You say how bias, sister up late into 
    the night, telling lies and destroying 
    lives, if that true then God will deal with 
    her too but for right now we are talking 
    about you. 

    With tears rolling doing his face he promised
    a promise he could never keep because there is something about this love out of sight late into
    the night makes this brother forget all that is right. 

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    gogant commented on Love Out Of Sight

    02-05-2010

    Some were born to drift, and some were born to stay...if only there was an easy way to keep one's mate at home and be happy. Your poem is a winner, infiniti.......................................gogant
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    Beetle726 commented on Love Out Of Sight

    11-17-2009

    You just described a million affairs that are spun out of lies.
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    TCpoeboy commented on Love Out Of Sight

    11-08-2009

    Cool short and to the point. I like reading material that tells a story and leaves U with clear understanding. Cool write!
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    infiniti

    11/08/2009

    Thanks I am pleased that u liked my work and I hope u continue to read more and share ur input. Your friend in poetry, Infiniti

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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