2/64

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    2/64
    tumbling
    catch a
    hold
    slipping please
    knocked
    cracking,
    to have to pied piper
    yourself
    to sleep...
    sometimes you wake
    up
    and can almost
    for a blink
    catch on

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    Lolee commented on 2/64

    08-28-2009

    Very whimsical. I am the same way...when I wake up, for just a second I remember then it all fades away till I lay my head on my pillow late at night, then my dreams resurface somewhat.
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    lightcourier commented on 2/64

    05-03-2009

    nice. thanks!
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    AdelKernan commented on 2/64

    02-28-2009

    "to have to pied piper yourself to sleep..." wonderful.
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    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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