graceful plateau?

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    graceful plateau?

     memories
    rememoried once more,
    pulled forward
    by time spent untangling,
    clarifying,
    still mystifying,
    the precious dimming webbing.

    we weave our past
    unaware,
    careless and unable to grasp
    our experiences' imprinting,
    the loops and knots:
    our life loom.

    myriads of puzzles and dots
    connecting us (up to real time) with ourselves,
    revealing the unique snapshots,
    synthesized naturally and,
    for the most part, gently, if grudgingly, accepted.

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    ginga commented on graceful plateau?

    11-26-2009

    arfin, A poem of truths, imagery, intricate patterns that weaves its own message of life. Clever and well-crafted. ginga
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    StandingBear commented on graceful plateau?

    11-26-2009

    Accepting ourselves is a formidable challenge indeed. Our past up to our "graceful plateau". Your fine writing leaves nothing out. Great!
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    Lolee commented on graceful plateau?

    08-28-2009

    Quite interesting. I like this. All we see is the backside of this tapestry of time...and what we created. One day God will turn it over and see just exactly what kind of picture we painted, or rug we have woven with the "time" given. Nice job arfin09
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    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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