warm now

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  • Passion

    warm now
    lost torment
    tears cried openly,
    time-closed, a shaded red gaze smile of hope,
    cradled close
    nuzzled softly,
    forcing happiness before tired past.

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    Lolee commented on warm now

    08-28-2009

    This works, but "lost" instead of "Past" throws it off a mite. But still in all...nice.
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