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  • Angst

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    and its then
    when you can no longer hope
    no longer hate
    no longer want
    no longer feel
    when you stare at walls
    trembling your fingers
    wearing a mask of sleep
    knowing you're lost
    knowing emptiness
    knowing nothing
    knowing it may never leave
    is it (this time) nearly over?

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    lightcourier commented on over

    05-03-2009

    If the lamb knew that day would he still run and skip and play? Hints of blake. Nice work. Thanks.
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    tennessee commented on over

    03-10-2009

    Yes...near to being just so I believe. We simply can not know how many moons it may take...beings time is man made. I do not find (most)anyone's work to be anything other than worthy. Perhaps Moonshine needs some reviews on the work she? has posted....lol.
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    moonshine commented on over

    03-02-2009

    you have some gaul,,,judging anyone else,,,with this bogus assembly of words
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    arfin09

    11/28/2009

    thank you. only MY suggestions.no GALL

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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