A Homecoming for Me

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Early in my active Air Force career, while stationed in Washington (state), I wrote this poem, as an attempt to ease my own sadness of being away from home and family. Recently, in 2009, I watched a movie with Kevin Bacon, playing the role of a Marine office, who escorts a Marine (a fallen hero) home, after serving in combat. The film, "Taken Chance," follows this poem...to some degree. Almost as if I had written the script...years prior to the real-life event occurring. Weird.

A Homecoming for Me

Today I boarded a plane –
  one bound for home,
    no more open roads for this kid to roam;
in the terminal a young girl vending roses –
  red ones only,

a woman sat nearby, all dressed in black –
she look so lonely.

 

Some awaited the arrival of a loved one –
others bid farewell to a future yet undone;

my sergeant, a godly man –

  wanted the best homecoming for me:
he sent a letter to my mom and local paper –
for all to see;

the letter noted my accomplishments –
and his own thought,

that all I ever wanted –
was peace and love taught.

 

A young boy watched as the attendants prepared the plane:
he noticed a strange package being
     loaded on-board,
an elderly man eased the boy’s bewilderment,    

           and said, ”that’s a coffin, young man.”        

 

A sunny day had been forecast –
flags all over town hung at half-mast;

mom was there, a blank look on her face –
a tear and her mascara left its trace;

sis, she’s in a state of shock –
fore she knows her lil’ bro
will never again rock.

 

A tear rose in the boy’s eye –
he knew not why;

as he watched, he heard a voice –
it was I, as I said,
”good-bye, I am going home.”

as the boy looked out –
he saw my smile reflected
in the window pain,

he waved good-bye –
    as I lifted off, into the rain….
      © 1985 Randolph D. Brown, Jr.

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Rhymer commented on A Homecoming for Me

02-07-2010

Excellent write, I got the intended refrence to pain as opposed to pane. I wrote one where shadows were attached to mens soles, meaning to the bottom of their feet. I was reminded the proper way to spell it was soul. 10 from me.

Shilohii65 commented on A Homecoming for Me

02-06-2010

PS: for those who might want to edit the last stanza and correct the word "pain," to the word "pane," I intended it to be that way. The window is reflecting the boys pain...poetic license here. Thanks anyway. rdbj

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