A LOVE STORY

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FALLING IN LOVE WITH JESUS WAS THE BEST THING I'VE EVER DONE!

A LOVE STORY

   Our vows were so simple. You have proven all of your promises to me, stuck with me through the good and the bad. Even when I turned my back on you, cheated on you or just resisted the things you had for me...you stood there with open arms, outstretched towards me, calling me, asking me to come back. You have over and over again proven your love for me.
   I love the way you hold me, touch me, caress me. How secure you make feel! I love the way you have chosen to be with me all day and still at night you choose to lay with me, hold me and give me a sense of security in the dark. I love the way you whisper in my ear. Your words are always the right ones at the right time. I'm amazed at how when I hurt you hurt. When I cry you cry. Your understanding of me is astonishing! I love the way you pull me close to you and how you have found me worthy to conceive with you. How you have planted a seed in me and fertilized it. How you have impregnated me with your Word. And how you allow me to birth out your blessings, through my speech, my work, my writings, my life.
   I must say you truly are a God who will keep his promises. Never have you left me nor forsaken me and I love you for that. Your love for me has been like no other. Absolutely nothing has separated your love from me. And because of that I know that Paradise will be my home and my soul will live happily ever after.

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Worthless commented on A LOVE STORY

03-03-2011

the greatest love of all a human and God and human and child

The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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