a superb absurdity (did occur to me)

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    a superb absurdity (did occur to me)

    snowflake,have her barren mother,winter equinox
    fall to the showers from blossoming spring.
    as rain slowly wets all new life with the eternal bright sky.
    fatherless death,begin a cycle;you cloud out my cold end.why?
    rise dry sun and let your summer solstice's light pass through me.
    see what i feel,this short dark night freezes it.
    a tide flowing out,like stary ice,will always use you.
    it was love's breeze he longed for.like a warm crescent moon slice.
    over there and here,these were about how time
    turned minute,as day,after month,next year.
    leave,run,yet can not go.
    ask nature,she an earth century.
    seasoned dirt are bounty.

                   tyke

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    knight4696 commented on a superb absurdity (did occur to me)

    09-04-2009

    Tyke - I liked the flow and the reference to the seasons - both ends and beginnings. It is definately well written and inspirational. It does reflect a different style from some of your others, I enjoyed the change of pace.

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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