he did me father

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    he did me father

    i was an altered boy
    until the transformation was complete.
    when my desiredness became
    my desired bliss,
    the priest turned to another younger soul
    in need of saving from the beast.
    ahh, men!

     tyke

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    knight4696 commented on he did me father

    10-07-2009

    LOL! Tyke - I love the way you mask the humor in your poems. This one is hysterical!!! Great write!! Saved to faves!

    PamelaALamppa commented on he did me father

    10-07-2009

    "when my desiredness became my desired bliss," These are telling lines - and truths. Many will be disturbed by this write, but I think you have spoken well - words that should be heard. Excellent. I look forward to reading more of your writes. ~Pamela

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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    final dimension 2
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    little roy screw 1
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    a familiar stranger 1
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    just a quickie 2
    my dearest 2
    a stand 1
    self realization 1
    coping with composure 2
    parting past 2
    sparks 3
    the space your absence fills 2
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    inside the ride 1
    life's savings 1
    pursuing my dreams 2
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    pook's lullaby 1
    just a thought at hand 1
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    orchid midnight 1
    just friends; and then? 1
    one branch (observation) 1
    you, sharing me;who cares? 1
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    floating hearts 1
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    a revealed vision of love 1
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    a superb absurdity (did occur to me) 1
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