“The Brotherhood”

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“The Brotherhood”

 

The eye which watches everything

And guides us through these times

The bond we have unbreakable

So very rare to find

 

The shield which bores us through the blows

Built durable and strong

Shielding us from every strike

Though battles may be long

 

The sword which strikes down any foe

Whomever it may be

The head force in the battles fight

Fights hard to no decree

 

Together built a bond as one

Just as a family should

The eye, the shield, and sword our marks

True brothers understood

 

Written By

Edward Lee Palmer II

‘December 29, 2008’

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Panaramicpoet commented on “The Brotherhood”

05-22-2009

I am writing about a mideaval story . . . the brother hood thing is really cool. I like it bro. Keep writing ;).

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Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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