Addictions
The addiction
Killing her inside
It pulls at her
tears at her
ruins her to the core
It tears at her skin
begging,
to be set free.
To rule over her
In the outside world
She begs
Leave me alone!
But it stays with her...
Always
Addictions
2 Comments
Tags: Life
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Savant commented on Addictions
10-26-2009
- I think most addictions start internally and then manifest themselves in a physical way. With few words you establish that fact. I like that. I also like the simplicity of this piece. Not overly descriptive. Not a day in the life of someone with an addiction, ...it simply describes what an addiction can do. I enjoyed reading this.
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BrandonC commented on Addictions
10-26-2009
- Wow, very physical. The descriptions are vivid and realistic and the picture, to me, is quite desolate, lending itself to the words. As I read I could see the emotion and I almost wish I could rescue her.
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