ALMOST HAD IT ALL

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    ALMOST HAD IT ALL

    It was far from perfect but the situation seemed far beyond my call
    thoughts racing in my head trying to put the pieces together where it all began to fall;
    I tried to pull away but my heart said yes as my mind said no
    torn between the two, I'm stuck in the stage of I don't know;
    Didn't we almost have it all but i came to a screeching halt with just one phone call;
    Looking back on life I wonder what did I do to desevere such a fate
    A fate to be doomed to love another woman's soulmate;
    I came up with all these excuses to justify what i did as rite,
    and because I know it's wrong I find it hard to sleep at nite;
    Tossing and turning, because of nightmares showing my guilt
    I just wish I wasn't so misunderstood I wish people could see how I felt;
    Knowing someone is hurting because of the pain i've caused, makes me want to cry,
    But I can't help feeling this way, because without him I just mite;
    If I had to do it all again I would say yes in a heartbeat, becaus I can't and won't see it no other way
    And I sometimes still pray and hope that we'll be together if it be God's will, one day

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    lithiumblack commented on ALMOST HAD IT ALL

    08-05-2009

    Life is a cruel and merciless teacher, and you've conjured near perfect words in this poem to reflect just that. Another 10.

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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