HIDE AND SEEK

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    HIDE AND SEEK

    As the game goes, it's the sun's turn to hide while the moon comes out to count

    The clouds engulf the sun as the moon rises in the sky

    Following the moon, are the twinkling night lights which clues his path

    The light of the luminous moon grace the shoulders of the mountains

    And the stars dance about

    Hours go by and the search has begun and the moon begins his quest

    He peeks in and out the clouds and got a glimpse of the sun's rest

    The sun light blinds the moon's eyes, as they accidently collide

    And the game starts all over again, and now it's the moon's turn to hide

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    Qualin commented on HIDE AND SEEK

    04-21-2010

    UNIQUE,VERY GOOD WRITE FLOWS,YOU HAVE A GREAT TALENT PURSUE WRITING YOU WILL BE A GOOD POETRESS...YOUR FRIEND QUALIN

    1blackbarbie

    07/15/2010

    aww thank you. i hope so

    MalikPeterson commented on HIDE AND SEEK

    03-09-2010

    an interesting analogy on the process by which the sun rises and sets or night and day. It was cleverly disguised as a game. Kudos for the freshness :)

    1blackbarbie

    03/09/2010

    thank you very much. it took a minute to figure how to word it. glad you enjoyed it =)

    MalikPeterson

    03/09/2010

    you are welcome :)

    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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