Angry

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    Angry

    I'm tired of being taken for granted
    Sick of of people plucking up things that which I have planted
    Disgusted on how no one takes me seriously
    Appalled at the ones who sneak about me curiously
    Ashamed on how poorly i've portrayed myself
    Angry at people who thinks of them and no one else
    Distant from the world to the point of no return
    Because I'm saddened by all the things that I have and haven't learned
    Disturbed by the things i've seen and heard
    And a little perturbed on account I couldn't find a better rhyming word
    Lonely and scared because I have no one to lean on
    Flabergasted of the amount of weight I put on
    Exhausted from the amount of work iI put in
    And fed up with all the work I do and not being able to win
    I'm at my breaking point! tired of all these broken promises
    Done hit my max with the atmosphere, foreboding and ominous

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    sandyeyes commented on Angry

    09-08-2009

    You are very talented. I really enjoyed reading this poem. Great work!

    1blackbarbie

    09/09/2009

    thank you very much... i'm really trying to get better, tho.

    zealous123 commented on Angry

    08-28-2009

    hey lil momma great work u keep writing, i feel u, u jus keep doing u, u got talent. "U GO GIRL "

    1blackbarbie

    09/09/2009

    thank you very much... i'm really trying to get better, tho.

    1blackbarbie

    09/09/2009

    thank you very much... i'm really trying to get better, tho.

    lithiumblack commented on Angry

    08-05-2009

    "The mirror is the enemy, but only if we allow it to be. You are resonsible for your own evolution, and nothing more. It is only when we are able to reach a place within ourselves where understanding lives, will we ever truly be able to call our own bodies and minds, home." -Nietzsche- Beautiful poem. You have a great talent for sparking emotion in your readers. I'm quickly becoming a fan of your work.

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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