Bermuda Grass

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Bermuda Grass




As I stood up
I felt it and recalled taking it off
To soothe my hands with fragrant lotion.
Nonchalantly,
I watched it tumbling down,
Forever
Slipping out of reach
Deep in the underbrush of Bermuda Grass
And I thought,

`I can come back later, with a metal detector,
If not,
It is a good place,
For the anniversary ring
That meant to him only another
Opportunity
For an outward show to feign affection'.

I can still see it fall,
And could make quite a spectacle
Describing it's descent and final resting place,
Swallowed by the luxuriant sponge.

But I shall not!
Be as flamboyant as he was in presenting it as a
Display,
Not intimately.

Still,
As I drive past,
I sometimes glance
For I do know the spot by the curb;
I do not stop.

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Tempestlady commented on Bermuda Grass

07-19-2009

Me too. I coulg g back and look, but i don't. Good write... just a little more rhyme would have suited me better. Write on....

hdmac commented on Bermuda Grass

06-16-2009

A little confused at the ending of the poem. Are you passing by the same area where you lost the ring?

suezqt7

06/16/2009

Yes, It happened at a place I drive by occassionally. Sometimes I think of renting a metal detector, but the ring is not a happy memory so I do not stop but all the memories come rushing back...

Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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