blue tinted sunnies


  • Confusion

    blue tinted sunnies

    coffee makes me crazy
    I knew I shouldn't have had that second cup
    I dont know what it is about nescafe 
    that makes me want to spill my guts.

    well now out with it..............

    Like a dam about to break
    its a kind of silence that is fatally frightful
    a kind of quiet that makes the air tangible
    til all comes flooding down... 
    a silence as deadly as when it all comes 
    and finally breaks

    freedom after the flood???????

    Are you effing serious?
    who would have thought?
    truth be told I make this up as I go
    I make this up so maybe I can grow
    Into freedom (a true release)
    Into happiness

    But its all a lie
    A lie I made up
    to comfort me
    to falsely give me 
    to move forward...
    that kinda forward is not even productive

    I am in the future
    my feet have bought me here
    but my heart 
    like my mind
    I have left behind somewhere
    in my blameful past

    I dont know what I fear more
    the silence of the dam before
    or after when all is ashore.............

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    Chaos128 commented on blue tinted sunnies


    Nothing is more nerve-wracking than the calm before the storm (unless it's sitting in the dentist's waiting room). The upside is it's almost never as bad as you imagined it was going to be. Your stuff is really superior, Franny. Engage a few people on the site; don't be shy about promoting yourself a little. You'll be doing a favor to quite a few people besides yourself.



    thanks again....but ummm...i wouldn't know how to promote myself exactly....

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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