Chamenos

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  • Life
    • Oraios
    • "Morning without you is a dwindled dawn." -E. Dickinson

    Chamenos
    Though time has faded
    and life seems so lost 
    I'd still say yes again 
    to the one I lost,

    The winters are cold now 
    and the summers are hot
    I welcome the new
    and remember the lost,

    You seem so forgotten 
    you seem so far 
    like you never were
    just a dream lost in my heart,

    Though time has faded
    and life seems so lost
    I'd still say yes again
    to the one I lost.

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    Crush commented on Chamenos

    07-12-2010

    simple, delightful and honest. nice flow of word and emotion, well done.....8 from me.
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    Rhymer commented on Chamenos

    02-05-2010

    Can't say enough about how well this poem was written. I was drawn into the passages from the very first stanza on. 10 from me.
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    Milkman commented on Chamenos

    01-27-2010

    another unrequited love......at your age you feel it so deeply, at my age it is but a constant small ache that you can never quite forget, but the loss is no less great.....a good job on an over worked theme
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    Oraios

    01/27/2010

    Thank you for the feed back but its about when I was going to move away from San Diego when i was 14 not love. Thats why the picture is of the city.

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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