Close your eyes and you will see the truth

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Close your eyes and you will see the truth

For centuries man has attempted to shield us from reality

Unscrupulous thoughts manifest to cause many casualties

The UFO phenonmenon is the beginning of a myriad of anomalies

Substantiated evidence is no longer a validated sign of proof
In July 1952, many witnessed UFOs hovering over the White House roof
Till this day no viable explanation has been given to the public but a mere spoof

The Roswell incident is the holy grail of conspiracies involving extraterrestrials
A weather balloon was found and the media disseminated their outlandish story
Despite the fact that Colonel Corso was an eyewitness with the guts and glory

Technological advancments were made with the celestial inheritance
Night vision goggles, accelerated particle beams and lasers to name a few
Distorted information has left mothers sitting in the front row of a pew

The veil of secrecy has been placed over our eyes and if we remain in the dark we will never see the light

Close your eyes and you will see the truth
Unless you believe in fairy tales and is expecting the tooth fairy to confiscate your tooth

Ask questions and demand answers , that's the only way to defeat the cancer!

 

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ladypoet commented on 5/18/03

06-03-2009

Beautiful message I must say. I like the way you supported your case with such evidence. That message is strong, yet very true. Good work sweetheart. Much love -Lady P.

hbenitez

06/03/2009

Thank you so much for the feedback and I truly appreciate your inspiring words. One Love.

hbenitez

06/03/2009

Lady P I posted a few more poems and would like your feedback and if you wish for me to return the favor just give me the word.

jademelissa74 commented on 5/18/03

06-03-2009

Wow! I like the content, the portrayal of the message. We walk in life blind-folded, unaware of technological advancements, distorted information and conspiracies at hand. Your poems will reach the reader. Great Job! I remember there were 5 e.t. 4-1/2 feet tall with greyish-brown skin, four-fingered hands and oversized hairless heads, found at the Roswell UFO crash site, two of them still alive, apparently! Geez, it makes my skin crawl!!! :))

hbenitez

06/03/2009

Yeah that's correct one was actually hunted down and killed according to the head of the foreign technology desk by the name of Phillip J. Corso. I never really liked any poem I wrote but the people who recieve it think otherwise. I read some of your poems and their amazing! You are talented and you merit all the praise that comes your way.

hbenitez

06/03/2009

I posted a few more poems I wrote it would be very generous of you to give me some feedback. If you wish me to return the favor just give me the word.

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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