"When words speak louder than actions"

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    Poem Commentary

    The poem is the culmination of the history in America and how it has changed throughout time and mortal men who only speak but do not act.

    "When words speak louder than actions"

    Their has been a history of deceit in our country

    Mortal men refuse to live up to the notion of land of the free

    And home of the brave our founding fathers owned slaves

     

    Generation after generation racial tension seemed unbearable

    A man named Lincoln would be considered the savior of the human race

    Indoctrinating biblical scriptures in his inaugural address

     

    Contrary to popular belief the man was not religious, in fact

    Christianity was used as a tool to persuade the general public

    If actions speak louder than words well the following stanza is absurd

     

    The suspension of habeas corpus is a violation of our due process law

    Going to war under false premises is unconstitutional

    Men who embody these characteristics is politics as usual

     

    A century would pass and all men remained unequal

    MLK leader of the civil rights would lead a non-violent protest

    Down capitol hill in which a dream unfulfilled merit’s a sequel

     

    Now the dream has been achieved but will reality set in?

    Barack Obama has spoken words of hope and change

    A financial crisis, healthcare insurance, war in Iraq where shall he begin?

     

    Ancestors of past civilizations shed blood, sweat and tears

    Many picked cotton and others fell victim to the wrath of the whip

    Permanent scars that will not heal but never let us fear

     

    Education should be highly valued and victimization has meet its end

    1776 through 2009 has been a culmination to the events that have unfold

    Whether we break from the past or live as friends that story remains untold

     

    Lets exercise the words we speak into action and delivery us from danger

    Our forbearers envisioned a land of the free where citizens would have inalienable rights

    The time has come to see one another as our brethren rather than a distant stranger

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

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    heavensdaughter commented on "When words speak louder than actions"

    01-15-2010

    its nice to see someone else so passionate, good job, keep it up =)

    PoetChik commented on "When words speak louder than actions"

    06-12-2009

    Wow, this is great! I had a thought a few days ago of writing something similar... but the words just weren't coming to me! I'm glad you found the words to say what many of us were thinking.

    hbenitez

    06/14/2009

    Glad to be the beckon of insight that we all share I assume it was just my turn to spread the knowledge. Now is your turn to take the baton and continue the race.

    jademelissa74 commented on "When words speak louder than actions"

    06-10-2009

    Wow! You put your foot in it! I freaking love it! PUBLISH IT! People should read this! People MUST read this :))

    jademelissa74 commented on "When words speak louder than actions"

    06-10-2009

    Beautiful! Insightful! Full of truth! I love it! An amazing piece to cherish, to study, and to kneel down and pray. It is a true blessing to be an american these days, yet, we forget sometimes where it all begin and where we would like to be. You have manage to create a magnificent piece of TRUTH!

    hbenitez

    06/10/2009

    Blessed are those who seek refuge in the comfort of their words. Wow I actually did not feel the poem was that good, lol. Thanks for reassuring me that I'm doing the right thing. To be honest I'm never satisfied with any poem I write. But their are those as yourself who are inspirational by nature. Thank you for the voke of confidance.

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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