Darlin'

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Written 1/27/10

Darlin'

Darlin', you can hurt my feelings,
Then send me crying off to sleep.
Darlin', you can turn my nerves into a mess.
If you take the heart I give you
And light it with a match,
I will forgive you even after nothing's left.

But, Darlin', you can't fix my broken heart
With needles and a kiss, and Darlin',
You can't grant a shiny pair of wings.
Either send me straight to hell
Or treat me better than a queen
But, Darlin', both would give you power over me.

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The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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Promise 0
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