You...

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Written August 8, 2009

You...

God has yet to create a word that describes
How much you piss me off.
Letters combined perfectly that form
Sentences, metaphoric phrases
Syllables stressing the emphasis of what
I'm feeling.

You ignorant child...
You scared little boy...

I can hear it faintly like an
Inaudible whisper, like a fading
Breath in the dark.
What's the word resting on the tip
Of my tongue?
What's my heart aching to say?

You overcompensating...
You hypocritical...

Angry, sweetly bitter I am
Sweat dripping in beads down my temple
And onto the floor.
This is what I'm trying to say.

You blood-boiling...
You nerve-wrecking...

This is what you do to me!

You green-eyed...
You tiny-framed...

Oh how I hate the air you breathe!
What's the word that sums up everything?
How can I express this undiscovered...
This bird in cage emotion in which
I'm simmering?

You heart breaker...
You...

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