Dear God

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    I also wrote this in high school...

    Dear God
    Dear God,
    Oh God,
    They try to make me mad,
    I always stay glad,
    Dear God,
    I know you are busy,
    Can you please help me,
    My friends all hate me,
    Up here in Tennessee,
    Dear God,
    I know that you are there,
    Cause you can always hear,
    All of the people down here,
    Oh dear,
    Help Me!!
    Dear God!!

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    melanie23 commented on Dear God

    08-20-2009

    i like the flow. there is a bit of over use on a few phrases but that is just my opinion. all in all though it was written well
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    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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