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    I wrote this poem when I was in high school...

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    Help me Lord,
    I am bored,
    I can't talk,
    All I can do is walk,
    Help me Lord,
    I can't look,
    In my book,
    I love,
    As much as a dove,
    I hate as little as a stake,
    Help me Lord!!!

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    melanie23 commented on Help

    08-20-2009

    i have i bit of a hard time following this one but it does have good flow

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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