Her

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    Her
    As she walks by,
    She is the only thing in my eye,
    I think of her day and night,
    It hurts me not being able to know,
    Where things would end,
    Where life would go,
    I have been told that I am just sappy,
    All that I want is to be happy,
    To be loved,
    Nothing more,
    That's for sure,

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    freind commented on Her

    08-25-2009

    again very nice write .sounds of a glimmer in your eye . that catches your eye
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    melki18 commented on Her

    08-20-2009

    I really like this.. It very moving. I love it.. And its about love. It's short and sweet !
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    melanie23 commented on Her

    08-20-2009

    i know that feeling and ive been through what u discribe. short and sweet is better to get a message across better than something drawn out.
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    Plot121 commented on Her

    08-20-2009

    They say short and sweet is good and the flow as well as the message was well done. I enjoyed reading this piece good work Robert,,,
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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