Her2

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  • Lost Love

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    Just lost an associate the other night, and Her and Her2 is about that associate........................................ 8*(

    Her2
    Emptiness,
    Nothingness,
    Nothing for me any more,
    Trying 2 keep feelings back,
    Feeling about ready to crack,
    First poem in a long while,
    Life moves on,
    True feelings never gone,
    Crying my eyes out,
    All I wish to do is shout,
    Nothing able to be changed,
    Life completely rearranged,
    It's only for the better,
    God how I don't want to let her,
    As long as she's happy,
    Which she may be,
    For once I am gonna say exactly wut I feel,
    I am now completely miserable n it's so real,
    I swore not to interfere,
    That shall be the reason I just stand here,
    I love her from the bottom of my heart,
    So deep I have no clue where to start,
    She's in love,
    Hiding my tears as I look and say,
    That will always keeps me happy,
    Giving one last hug as I walk away,
    Hoping to see again someday...

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    Singing commented on Her2

    11-05-2009

    wow, such a beautiful and inspiriting poem! I love it very much. the content, the style, the form ! Come on! You are a great poetry
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    graceladymn commented on Her2

    09-21-2009

    Very moving Ray, you've chosen a good path if you follow your words, to keep the love in your heart for her even if it doesn't sound like she wants to continue in a love relationship with you. Love is deep like as you spoke, and it can hurt if it doesn't stay together as one hoped, but we can choose to hold the other in our heart with feelings of love rather than hurt and pain. Not easy I know, you wrote the feelings very well. Thank you for writing this and putting it out there.
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    evillover101 commented on Her2

    09-02-2009

    wow i really like it and you most really love that girl
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    photochick commented on Her2

    08-28-2009

    great job ray you dont give yourself enough credit this is great work passionate sad and full of emoton and depth the reader can really feel the loss you have endured and the saddness it is a beautiful poem and a 10 from me so much love is in your words you allow us all to connect and feel that in which you feel keep writing for your very very talented
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    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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