Evening Chill

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    • Sx9
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    Vacation 2024. All in a days work,,,sitting on rue crescent looking over the lush freeness,,,

    Evening Chill

    In twilight’s hush, the porch is still,
    A sanctuary on a hill,
    Where evening whispers gently fill
    The heart with peace and quiet thrill.
    The rocking stool begins to creak,
    A symphony that’s soft and sleek,
    As shadows play their hide-and-seek,
    And night prepares to softly speak.
    The stars emerge in velvet skies,
    With twinkling lights and fireflies,
    A dance of dreams before the eyes,
    A cosmic tale in silent guise.
    The scent of jasmine in the air,
    A fragrant breath, beyond compare,
    The night’s cool breeze, a tender care,
    As moonbeams weave through silver hair.
    The world is far, yet close in thought,
    With memories and dreams in wrought,
    A moment where all time is caught,
    On back porch where sweet peace is sought.
    In twilight’s hush, the veranda  is still,
    A sanctuary on a hill,
    Where evening whispers gently fill
    The heart with peace and quiet thrill.
    The rocking stool begins to creak,
    A symphony that’s soft and sleek,
    As shadows play their hide-and-seek,
    And night prepares to softly speak.
    The stars emerge in velvet skies,
    With twinkling lights and fireflies,
    A dance of dreams before the eyes,
    A cosmic tale in silent guise.
    The scent of jasmine in the air,
    A fragrant breath, beyond compare,
    The night’s cool breeze, a tender care,
    As moonbeams weave through silver hair.
    The world is far, yet close in thought,
    With memories and dreams in wrought,
    A moment where all time is caught,
    On back porch where sweet peace is sought.

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    Sx9 commented on Evening Chill

    08-30-2024

    Looking on over the green lush serene beauty ,,from rue crescent is nothing but breath taking ,,,vacation 2024 Jamaica,,,

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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