SET ME FREE

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    • Sx9
    • new book is out now,,,,INSIDE MY INNER THOUGHTS,,,SCUBIE ALBIE...

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    mix up moods and attitudes,old love speaks from the lips.hearth deeply buried in my soul,,

    SET ME FREE

     I dont wanna be your whore
    I dont wanna be your bitch
    I dont wanna be used
    All i want is for  you to love me
    Love me with everything you gave got
    If you cant, open the window and set me free
    If i perch on the window sill, 
    shoo me away and close the window
    and dont look back.
    Dont worry about me
    I will be fine, I am use to the pain
    Just let me fly free
    Just carrred away by the wind 

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    jj1562 commented on SET ME FREE

    03-20-2019

    Flee girl. If this relationship is older than 6 months it probably won't ever change. Stop wasting time and find someone who loves you well. I like the phrasing but the meter could use work. Some of the lines have a bunch of bouncing in the words but this would read more somber and smooth I'd guess
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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