Living True

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    struggles of life,,born poor and die poor,,,

    Living True

     one time ,life in the hills
    if you see my eyes walk away
    for we are looking deep into the belly of god
    man and the tribulations that one life bring ,,

    open consent as a child we come with smile
    looking for the openness of the future innocence
    simple unknown pearls un touched,embedded in our
    mind..

    all because god is love and he made us to love
    strange how we fall short of the promise and in
    so doing hold on to the world,science and yes
    laughter that fade with time,

    they say,learn to have riches and it shall be,
    fortune that wash up daily like frogs in winter
    for us to catch and make our life better,yet still
    I fail,

    life tell us,to be true and all  things will be true
    but god tell us to be true even after death,so we stay in the hills
    and if you see me walk away,for I am him that
    have no more that was born with for I am living true.. 

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    winterkou commented on Living True

    11-18-2010

    awesoem, we are to live and dwell in His spiirt . hios love is more powerful than any love we can now on earth.
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    Sx9

    11/18/2010

    well said...

    REGINA2 commented on Living True

    10-24-2010

    I liked this poem. It was very deep. I guess there is more to you than I thought previously. Will read more later.
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    Sx9

    10/24/2010

    THANKS FOR THE UPFULL WORDS OF PRAISE,,YES THERE IS,,

    ApaqRasgirl commented on Living True

    10-22-2010

    very nice, it is so amazing how people seem so different from one to the other on how they live, love and worship God, and yet we are all of the human race, makes one think that we would be more alike...but alas, there are the poor like us, ones like me from the mountains of TN and then those who have all the riches in the world, but yet it is us, the poor, the humble, the most innocent in our childhood who know how to find true love and happiness......this piece reached out and touched my spirit and soul dear friend.........well worth a 10 and more.......keep on rockin them out darling, you are getting there amazingly.........thanks for sharing........love asha
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    ESSENCEOFLOVE commented on Living True

    10-21-2010

    Everybody's truth is different but one thing is certain we all come to this earth innocent. Material wealth is always underrated to material wealth. Great write..........E
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    shakeme4life commented on Living True

    10-09-2010

    Lovely trip to this Eden of innocense , how easy it could be if we just equate love,,, thank you for sharing this poem,, this is the type of write i enjoy sharing with others for growth ...
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