feelings

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    feelings

     Down this darkened road I leave myself behind
    Where I am to go from here only the mystery remains
    Feelings and thoughts mix and swirl
    Endless colors fade into black
    Knowing not what is ahead but only what is left behind
    Leaving is not the difficult part for it is already done
    Yet the presence is in me still
    I suffocate on the air around me
    Life pushes its way into my chest and breaks open my heart
    Bleeding and in pain I have lost my way
    Keeping low to the Earth feeling my way to my destiny
    I can not hold on to this world while I stumble

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    AbysmalGoddess commented on feelings

    06-19-2009

    You look at life from a whole different angle, then put it in words... so many people can't even do that, thank you for providing me the perspective to see it how you do. Beautiful, outstanding, excellent job!!!! 10 from me!
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    paisley commented on feelings

    06-19-2009

    wow thats a really good poem! I wish I could write like that!
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    angellv

    06/19/2009

    thank you

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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