Let Go


  • Sadness

    Let Go

    Time has no meaning as I drift through oblivian
    Silence envelops me as I let go
    This release on life has given me nothing to take away
    Empty eyes of mine stare out with nothing to be seen
    Did I think it would be any different
    The empty shell of a souless being that I am
    Something or anything would cure the numb
    Not in my hands to help my own fate
    Breath in... Breath out

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    hoth2o commented on Let Go


    Indee! this one pulls you into the nothingness you speak of.

    dawnjyc commented on Let Go


    Angel, what an amazing job you did with this poem. Dark and vivid I was certainly pulled in. Nice write.

    davoc commented on Let Go


    AWESOME!! I love your writing it's dark like mine just way better. Any advice on mine?

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

    angellv’s Poems (10)

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    Mixed 0
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    Sadness 0
    Let Go 3
    Fate 1
    Silence 2
    My Dear Friend 1
    The Struggle 2
    The Road 3
    feelings 2