Let Go

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  • Sadness

    Let Go
    Time has no meaning as I drift through oblivian
    Silence envelops me as I let go
    This release on life has given me nothing to take away
    Empty eyes of mine stare out with nothing to be seen
    Did I think it would be any different
    The empty shell of a souless being that I am
    Something or anything would cure the numb
    Not in my hands to help my own fate
    Breath in... Breath out
    Nothing

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    hoth2o commented on Let Go

    08-06-2009

    Indee! this one pulls you into the nothingness you speak of.
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    dawnjyc commented on Let Go

    07-26-2009

    Angel, what an amazing job you did with this poem. Dark and vivid I was certainly pulled in. Nice write.
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    davoc commented on Let Go

    07-08-2009

    AWESOME!! I love your writing it's dark like mine just way better. Any advice on mine?
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    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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