Fickle Fantasy

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    Fickle Fantasy

    I felt I needed

    And I craved to have

    An understanding friend

     

    I dreamed and desired

    For so foolish a thing.

     

    But Now I know and see,

    What it is I truly need.

     

    My heart and mind long,

    For someone who will follow,

    When I run crying,

    Desperate, alone and afraid.

     

    Confused and lonesome I rest,

    Deceived and destroyed,

    By my foolishly fickle fantasy.

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    deathsolo commented on Fickle Fantasy

    06-11-2010

    i really like this one as welll...bc it is so true..we are lucky to have atleast one person in our life that we can connect to in such a strong way. LOVE IT!!!
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    frazel5 commented on Fickle Fantasy

    10-25-2009

    I think i chose a good one for my first read of yours. This is very well written. This can be applied to so many different things in life. Bravo.
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    DarkChi commented on Fickle Fantasy

    10-22-2009

    cute. i long for an understanding friend to....and yet i don't think i'd want a friend who be stupid to get killed
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    Tempy commented on Fickle Fantasy

    10-14-2009

    i get this... i never want someone who cant help rezscue
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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