Loose

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    Kinda confusing. This is really about a girl I like and just too afraid to say anything. . . so yeah. idk.

    Loose

    Around and round I fly

    Lighting on each new tree.

    This and that and there and here

    I’m never want for a place to perch.

    But the truest perch I wish for,

    The greatest thing I want,

    Is the one I’m too a-feared to find

    On the tree I will not land.

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    cmlestrade commented on Loose

    11-03-2009

    very good. the ending was very surprising and really made the poem.
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    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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